Carol Saller

Carol Saller

Clumsy Quoting: Spot the Problem

I am often distracted by the awkward way in which a writer integrates quotations into the text. But when I started to write here about the specific problems, I didn’t know where to start. Take a look at the following quotations. Why don’t the following quotations read smoothly? See if you feel as icky as I do reading them, and whether you can say why:

“Dear Carol: I Committed the Sin of Overediting”

I received an email from an author over the weekend. He was very unhappy with the job I did editing his book manuscript and writes that I did “too thorough” a job, changing sentences that did not need to be changed, and in the process, introduced some typographical errors and some content errors. I will not say that this is untrue. My question is how do you come back from that?

The August Q&A is up . . .

Q. If a person has two last names, but they are not hyphenated, like Harriet Beecher Stowe, how do you alphabetize them—by Beecher or Stowe?
[More questions (and answers!) at the Chicago Manual of Style Online.]

Dear Carol: How Do I Know When to Meddle?

Dear Carol, In general, would you agree that a copy editor should avoid making changes to the text unless a documentable style change and/or grammatical error has occured? What are your thoughts on using queries (in the comments) to attract the author’s attention to my suggestions?